Scene 11¶

Has Charlie Run It?¶

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Scene 11 ✨ Has Charlie Run It? ✨ [Celeste]

Scene Eleven — How a one-off becomes a rule (Celeste POV)

It didn’t become normal all at once.

Nothing that matters ever does. It becomes normal the way fabric becomes soft: through repetition, through use, through being pulled and released so many times that it stops fighting your hands.

The second prototype was a jacket. Again, different cut, different sleeve head, but the same intention: make it survive the day without turning it into armour. Mara hung it on the mannequin and stood back, chin lifted.

“Right,” she said. “We’re not sending Lucy out to be the crash test.”

Lucy, already half-grinning as if she knew she would normally have been volunteered, immediately stepped away as though the floor had become lava.

“Bless,” she said, and looked at me. “Thank you.”

Mara ignored her gratitude the way she ignored weather.

“Charlie.”

Charlie looked up from the bench where he’d been hand-stitching a reinforcement tape onto a waistband. He put his needle down carefully, as if precision was a form of respect, and stood.

“Yes?”

Mara held up the jacket with two fingers.

“Same drill.”

There was a pause — barely a pause, the smallest catch at the back of his throat — like a muscle remembering the first time it had been asked to do something it didn’t like. Charlie finally said, evenly,

“Right. Where’s the log sheet?”

That was the moment I realised something had shifted. The discomfort hadn’t vanished: it had been translated into structure. Into process. Into something he could control. Mara’s eyebrows lifted a fraction, as if she approved of the question.

“You’re learning.”

Charlie wordlessly took the sheet from the clipboard and moved toward the fitting curtain. He didn’t look at me, seeking reassurance. He simply did what he always did when the work demanded something unusual: he treated himself like a tool in the system, not a spectacle. Mara snapped the curtain closed with one decisive tug.

“Five minutes,” she called through it. Her tone wasn’t a demand, it was a deadline.

From behind the curtain came the rustle of fabric, the soft clink of a hook, the faint squeak of a shoe being shifted. Mara turned to the worktable and reached for her pencil. She made marks on the pattern piece as if she could already see what would fail. Lucy leaned toward me, voice low.

“He doesn’t... mind?”

I kept my voice neutral. “He minds. He just doesn’t wallow.”

Lucy blinked. Then she nodded as if that made perfect sense. Behind the curtain, Charlie’s voice came, quiet but steady.

“Arms up?”

Mara’s answer was immediate.

“Arms up. Twist. Bend. Lift.”

Charlie complied without complaint. You could tell, even without seeing him, that he was doing it precisely: same movements every time, the way you test a hinge, the way you test a clasp. A minute later he spoke again, report mode, not emotion mode.

“Pull at the front scye,” he said. “Tape stops the fabric. Needs to end before the pivot. Otherwise it becomes a lever.”

Mara’s pencil stopped.

“Say it again.”

Charlie repeated it, slightly clearer, like someone who had learned Mara’s ear needed clean sentences.

Mara nodded once, almost to herself. Charlie stepped out a moment later, jacket on, cheeks faintly flushed — not with embarrassment, with exertion. He came straight to the table as if the garment were just another prototype. He pointed at the underarm.

“Here,” he said. “Two millimetres more ease at the sleeve head. And you need the reinforcement tape to stop here.” He made a precise mark with chalk. “Otherwise it transfers force sideways.”

Mara stared at the chalk line, then at his face.

“That’s an answer,” she said.

Charlie swallowed. “It’s just… what it does.”

Mara snorted quietly.

“That’s what I mean,” she replied. “Most people don’t know how to listen to fabric.”

I wrote it down, because that was my role: turn the fixes into a record, so the atelier could grow without forgetting how it got better.

The third time it happened, Mara didn’t even announce it. She simply held up a skirt: new cut, new waistband, a clever closure arrangement we’d borrowed from an extant garment plate. She looked around the room. Lucy, without shame, shook her head.

“Nope,” she said. “Has Charlie run it?”

Mara’s eyes narrowed. “No.”

Lucy took a half-step back, hands raised in mock surrender.

“Then I’m not finding out where it splits,” she said. “I like my dignity.”

There was no laughter at Charlie. There was laughter at the idea of being the first casualty. It was different. It was women refusing to be the test surface. Mara’s gaze slid to Charlie.

“Charlie.”

Charlie didn’t even look surprised this time. He set his work down. He stood.

“Alright,” he said.

Then, quietly, without drama, he added, “Just… make sure the curtain rail is fixed. It catches.”

Mara’s eyes flicked to the curtain hardware as if it had personally offended her.

“Fine,” she said. “Someone fix it.”

That was Charlie’s agency: not asking to be spared, simply insisting on the conditions that made the work professional. It was another small shift. Not bravery in a classroom. Competence in a workplace. By the fourth incident, it had become a protocol without anyone formally naming it.

The staff began asking as if it was obvious.

“Has Charlie run it?” “Is this debugged yet?” “Can we get Charlie on it before we put it on shift?”

They were asking because they didn’t want to discover failure on the floor in front of tourists. They didn’t want to lose an afternoon to ripped seams and emergency pins. They didn’t want to carry the embarrassment of being the one whose garment broke. Charlie became the pre-test because Charlie was accurate.

Mara, predictably, hated anything that sounded like a request when it was really a system. One afternoon she finally snapped—not at Charlie, but at the room.

“Listen,” she said, voice cutting through the hum of irons and shears. “Stop making this personal. This is about efficiency.”

No one spoke. Everyone listened. Mara jabbed a finger at a bodice on the table.

“Repairs don’t need theatre,” she said. “Prototypes do. Anything new. Anything with a new closure or new stress profile—Rossignol runs it first. Then staff wear. That’s the order.”

She looked at Charlie as if daring him to misunderstand.

“Not because you’re special,” she added. “Because you’re honest. You don’t fake comfort. You don’t pretend something works when it doesn’t.”

Charlie’s ears went faintly pink. He looked down. Not shy—just uncomfortable with being named.

“I don’t… want anyone wasting time,” he said quietly.

Mara’s mouth twitched, something like approval.

“Good,” she said. “Neither do I.”

Later, weeks into this new rhythm, I caught the moment it became truly normal. A new jacket had been pinned, a clever cut I’d been excited about. It looked perfect on the mannequin. The silhouette was right. The closures sat where they should. It was one of those garments that made you want to clap.

Lucy reached for it, stopped, and glanced at Mara.

“Has Charlie run it?” she asked, casually, like she’d asked if it had been pressed.

Mara didn’t even look up from her pattern paper.

“No.”

Lucy put her hands back in her pockets.

“Then I’ll wait.”

No fuss. No jokes. No eyebrow raises. Just... order.

Charlie, at the bench, lifted his head.

“I can do it now.”

Mara’s response was immediate.

“Good,” she said. “Ten minutes. Break it on purpose.”

Charlie stood, took the log sheet off the clipboard without being told, and walked to the fitting curtain like a professional moving into position. As the curtain fell closed behind him, I felt a small, quiet satisfaction. School had made him visible in the worst way: public, exposed, used as a lesson.

Wardrobe had made him visible in the only way that mattered: as a person whose judgement the room trusted.

Not because we coddled him, but because we built a system where his precision had a place.

And once a precision like that has a place, it doesn’t stop.

It becomes the rule.

Previous Observations¶

You’re not blathering. You’re putting your finger on the exact seam where this story becomes either (a) a sharp, woman-centred exploration of power and “lived experience” or (b) something that accidentally pays out the wrong kind of reward. That seam is real. Treat it like wardrobe treats a stress point: reinforce it, don’t pretend it isn’t there.

And the good news is: the way you’ve framed it already (“Charlie gets nothing out of this”; Celeste finds his softness appealing; he’s not ‘suitor material’) is precisely how you keep female readership in mind. Because the female lens isn’t “ooh, feminisation”; it’s:

Who has agency?
Who is being read, and by whom?
What does this cost?
Who carries the social burden?
Who benefits from the arrangement—and do they admit it?

That’s your territory. And it’s safe from dopamine-chasers if you deny the usual “payoffs.”

The difference between “dangerous” and “useful” territory¶

Dangerous is when “feminine side” becomes a spectacle, a kink-coded transformation, a humiliation beat, or a “cute reveal” designed to titillate.

Useful is when “feminine side” is treated as:

temperament (restraint, empathy, aesthetic attunement),
social positioning (how he’s read, policed, and handled),
labour suitability (precision work, discretion),
and vulnerability (how power can be exercised over him).

In other words: softness is a vector for exploitation and connection, not a costume party.

You want to write it like women experience it: a constant negotiation of being perceived, managed, policed, and used.

That will not feel like candy to the wrong audience. It will feel like an indictment.

How to bring it in without feeding “that crowd”¶

Here are your guardrails, in practical terms:

1) Keep it about traits, not aesthetics¶

Avoid “he looks like a girl” beats, lingerie vocabulary, underwear jokes, mirror worship, etc.

Instead, make Celeste’s attraction (and it can be attraction, yes) land on things women recognise as rare:

he doesn’t compete with her,
he doesn’t demand she soothe him,
he listens and holds a boundary,
he notices details without using them as leverage,
he accepts instruction without sulking.

That’s not fetish. That’s competence and psychological safety.

2) Make Charlie’s “softness” a source of cost, not thrill¶

He pays for it socially. He’s underestimated, tested, pushed around. He has to carry fear and still behave with discipline.

If there’s any “charge” in the scene, it’s:

tension (will he be humiliated),
anger (at how the world treats him),
and a clear ethical stance from Celeste.

3) Let Celeste name the dynamic in policy language¶

Celeste does not say: “I like how girly you are.” She says something like:

“You don’t bring male chaos into a room.”
“You make space behave.”
“You’re careful. That’s rare.”

Women readers will get it immediately.

4) When the topic is spoken aloud, make it awkward in the right way¶

Not “awkward-cute,” but “this is a real conversation with consequences.”

Celeste should not flirt with it. She should handle it like a truth she’s reluctant to expose.

Charlie should not be “validated” by it. He should feel the weight of being categorised.

That’s the antidote.

What’s actually happening psychologically (and why it’s gold)¶

Celeste’s earliest interest in Charlie’s “feminine side” can be written as:

she senses he is governable without brute force,
he has low entitlement (rare in boys),
he is already living with some of the social constraints girls are trained into (self-monitoring, caution, deference),
and she recognises the utility of that—then becomes responsible for how she uses it.

That’s not a fetish story. That’s a power story.

Meanwhile Charlie:

doesn’t “want” feminisation,
doesn’t get erotic reward,
gets safety and structure from Celeste, and that becomes dangerously soothing.

That’s honest. And it’s the lived-experience angle you want: the shape of a girl’s world imposed on someone who didn’t choose it.

How to stage the conversation you’re describing¶

You need a scene where Celeste and Charlie come close to the truth without making it a “reveal.”

Best structure:

Trigger: someone makes a “joke” or a comment that tries to sexualise/emasculate Charlie.
Celeste intervenes decisively (policy).
Afterward, Charlie asks (quietly, not emotionally): “Why did you pick me?” or “Why are you doing this?”
Celeste answers with one honest sentence, then stops herself, then commits to clarity.

The crucial move: she frames it as capability and safety, not femininity-as-costume.

Example of Celeste’s kind of honesty (tone-safe):

“You don’t frighten women. Do you know how rare that is in a boy your age?”

That line will hit female readers like a bell. It will not titillate anyone. It’s accusatory.

Charlie’s response should be confused and a bit stung—not aroused, not pleased.

Are you tiptoeing into something you should avoid?¶

You’re tiptoeing into something you do want — you just need to keep your footing.

The moment it becomes:

“pretty,”
“humiliating,”
“he’s secretly into it,”
“look at the underwear,”
“forced makeover” as entertainment,

…you’ve crossed into dopamine territory.

But if you keep it as:

power + perception,
safety + boundaries,
labour + capability,
the social cost of softness,

…you’ll be writing exactly the kind of sophisticated, woman-readable story you’re aiming for.

If you want, I can write the next scene with those guardrails locked in: a public comment tries to turn Charlie into a joke, Celeste shuts it down, and later she answers “why him” with a single sentence that’s both truthful and uncomfortable — the kind of truth that doesn’t reward prurience, it confronts it.